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================================ ┼ ▨ 고수님들 몇점이나 나올까여? - 에세이6점 ┼ │ 몇점이나 받을수 있을까요? 한 세시간 걸려서 쓴 글인데.. │ 주저마시고 쓴소리 해주시구요, │ 항상 행복한 하루되시길^^* │ │ Q : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teacher. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. │ │ Throughout my life, parents were the best teacher whom I have ever seen. Even though I have seen many teachers, no one could have satisfied me as much as parents. They know their children best and they can take care of children with deep love and attention. This is the reason why parents are the best teacher in the world. Through the use of a couple of examples and specific explanation, I will demonstrate why I think it like that. │ First, parents know their children best. We can teach someone very well when we understand his character, ability and aptitude. Parents know all that things more than any other teacher. When I was young, I had few friends. But because my parents knew that I liked to play ball, they made me to go playground where many children played. As the result, now I can get acquainted with a person easily. Parents helped me with understanding whenever I faced a bad situation. │ Second, parents raise their children with deep love and attention. Affection and concern are very important thing for children’ lifetime. I know a cripple who deserted by their friend and teacher. However he grow into great manhood with parents’ particular attachment and interest. I am sure that only such parents’ love and attention can do it. Eternal love and interest are good example, which show parents’ ability as teacher. │ In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents are the greatest teacher in children’ lives. Children need sufficient understanding, affection and concern, in my point of view, only parents can give it to their children. │ │ ┼ ┼
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